Амалсан ёсоор гадаадын их дээд сургуулудад суралцахад бүрдүүлэх материалуудын талаар нийтэлж байна. Энэ удаад autobiography буюу намтарыг хэрхэн бичих талаар оруулж байна.
Намтар бичихэд өөрийгөө болон өөрийн өнгөрсөн амьдарлыг зүгээр нэг бичээд болчихгүй. Маш уран, хүний сонирхол татхаар бичих нь чухал байдаг. Ингээд нэгэн сонирхолтой жишээтэйгээр нийтлэлээ хүргье
Ер нь сургуулиудад маш олон тэтгэлэгт хамрагдах хүсэлт ирдэг байх. Шалган сонголт хийдэг хүмүүс нь залуусын материал үзээд дөжөрчихсэн байдаг биз. Нүдээрээ нэг гүйлгэж хараад л өнгөрдөг байх. Тийм учираас таны материал, бичсэн зүйлүүд тань хүнийг өөрөөсөө салгамгүй сонирхол татам, тийм л байх нь чухал. Бусдаас өөр сэтгэгдэл төрүүлж чадвал таны тэнцэх магадлал маш ихээр нэмэгдэнэ.
Чадварлаг боловсон хүчин, чадварлаг нэгэн охины бичсэн намтарыг энд жишээ болгьё. Тэрээр одоо 100% ийн тэтгэлэгээр магистрт суралцдаг. Мөн түүнд баярласнаа илэрхийлье. Ингээд нэгэн чадварлаг сайн бичсэн намтартай танилцана уу.
Нэр ажил, хувийн мэдээлэлүүдийг өөрчилсөн болно. Та залхууралгүй уншаад нэг үзээрэй. Бэрхшээл гарвал словар бариад суу. Хэрвээ та тэтгэлэгээр харь улсад сурна гэсэн зорилготой л бол энийг унших ёстой.
Нэр ажил, хувийн мэдээлэлүүдийг өөрчилсөн болно. Та залхууралгүй уншаад нэг үзээрэй. Бэрхшээл гарвал словар бариад суу. Хэрвээ та тэтгэлэгээр харь улсад сурна гэсэн зорилготой л бол энийг унших ёстой.
I was born on a rainy day in November in Ulaanbaatar, Mongolia. I’m now still living in Ulaanbaatar City and I’m working in Vlmedeh Company. I live with My mother; Enkhmaa, my dad, Bold; my sister, Saraa; and my sister’s husband Bat. I have another married sister, Chimgee and she lives with her husband and two children in Erdenet City, Mongolia . I very love my sweet family.
Who I’m in life
My name is Enkhjin Bold. I started school when I was seven-years-old. I went to kindergarden, while I was there , I won an award for perfect attendance. I also won second place for talent singing and dancing from the “Small Singers” Contest in 1994. Then I enrolled in the secondary school No.50 with the advanced training of Russian of the capital city in 1995. At my studying in seventh grade I was transferred to the ‘Vlmedeh’ secondary school, and there also won a couple of awards: third place in Table Tennis Contest of School in 2003 and second place in the Olympiad of the English held among the secondary school of the capital city in 2003. I trained in the course with the advanced training on the chemistry for two years during my studying. I successfully completed my secondary school majoring on the social science with “A” grade in 2005. After graduation I entered the University of the Mongolia in 2005 under the selection for the students specializing on the Business Management with Chinese. While I was study in 4th grade, I did my first intership in “ITF” Co.,ltd and second intership in “Khan bank”. I successfully graduated and awarded /Diploma with Distinction/ degree of Bachelor of Science in Business Administration with professional Chinese. My GPA /3.7/, thesis “ Analysis on financial activities of commercial banks /95 A/, graduation examination of Chinese /97 A/. After graduation I worked in “Anod Bank” as a teller, as a supervisor accountant and VIP customer accountant. Now I’m working in the “Vlmedeh”Co.,Ltd as a financial manager. I want to studying in abroad by Scholarship for master degree to improve my education.
What life mean to me
Life to me means friends and family who I can trust and who trust me . I have a lot of friends , they are school friends and friends who worked with me in the Khan bank and Vlmedeh company. My friends and my family make my life happy and interesting. I’m not seeing anyone now but when I did have a boyfriend, our favorite places to go were the movies and out to dinner. Sometimes we went to the camp. We were together for six months and then we broke-up, so no, I don’t think it was forever.
What’s my outlook on the future
The year 2017 will make eight years since I graduated from University. I think I will probably be still living here in Ulaanbaatar. I will be quite comfortable with my living situation, meaning that I will be married to with my classmate. We will have one child: Maral, who at that point will be one years old. My husband is a sweet guy: he will do anything for anyone. He is six feet tall and built well. He has brown eyes and black hair. We will have been together for two years and will be happy together- this is forever.
Conclusion
As I said in the beginning, I was born here in Ulaanbaatar and I’ve lived here my whole life. I would like to see more of the other countries of the world, but unfortunately I don’t have enough money to leave Mongolia to go anywhere right now. I hope you have enjoyed reading my life story as much as I have enjoyed writing it for you.
Who I’m in life
My name is Enkhjin Bold. I started school when I was seven-years-old. I went to kindergarden, while I was there , I won an award for perfect attendance. I also won second place for talent singing and dancing from the “Small Singers” Contest in 1994. Then I enrolled in the secondary school No.50 with the advanced training of Russian of the capital city in 1995. At my studying in seventh grade I was transferred to the ‘Vlmedeh’ secondary school, and there also won a couple of awards: third place in Table Tennis Contest of School in 2003 and second place in the Olympiad of the English held among the secondary school of the capital city in 2003. I trained in the course with the advanced training on the chemistry for two years during my studying. I successfully completed my secondary school majoring on the social science with “A” grade in 2005. After graduation I entered the University of the Mongolia in 2005 under the selection for the students specializing on the Business Management with Chinese. While I was study in 4th grade, I did my first intership in “ITF” Co.,ltd and second intership in “Khan bank”. I successfully graduated and awarded /Diploma with Distinction/ degree of Bachelor of Science in Business Administration with professional Chinese. My GPA /3.7/, thesis “ Analysis on financial activities of commercial banks /95 A/, graduation examination of Chinese /97 A/. After graduation I worked in “Anod Bank” as a teller, as a supervisor accountant and VIP customer accountant. Now I’m working in the “Vlmedeh”Co.,Ltd as a financial manager. I want to studying in abroad by Scholarship for master degree to improve my education.
What life mean to me
Life to me means friends and family who I can trust and who trust me . I have a lot of friends , they are school friends and friends who worked with me in the Khan bank and Vlmedeh company. My friends and my family make my life happy and interesting. I’m not seeing anyone now but when I did have a boyfriend, our favorite places to go were the movies and out to dinner. Sometimes we went to the camp. We were together for six months and then we broke-up, so no, I don’t think it was forever.
What’s my outlook on the future
The year 2017 will make eight years since I graduated from University. I think I will probably be still living here in Ulaanbaatar. I will be quite comfortable with my living situation, meaning that I will be married to with my classmate. We will have one child: Maral, who at that point will be one years old. My husband is a sweet guy: he will do anything for anyone. He is six feet tall and built well. He has brown eyes and black hair. We will have been together for two years and will be happy together- this is forever.
Conclusion
As I said in the beginning, I was born here in Ulaanbaatar and I’ve lived here my whole life. I would like to see more of the other countries of the world, but unfortunately I don’t have enough money to leave Mongolia to go anywhere right now. I hope you have enjoyed reading my life story as much as I have enjoyed writing it for you.
За нэг иймэрхүү бичсэн байна. Миний үзэж сонирхож байсан Монгол хүмүүсийн autobiography дундаас хамгийн сонирхолтой сайн болсон нь энэ гэж би боддог. Тэр ирээдүйн талаарх төсөөлөл, уран сэтгэмжүүд нь хүний сонирхолыг татахгүй байхын аргагүй.
Анхаарал хандуулсан явдалд баярлалаа таньд амжилт хүсье.
16 comments
Xeregtei medeelel bna. Bayallaa. Bi gadaadad surax moroodoltei negen bna
Батнягт::::: Амжилт хүсье чи чаднаа
Зурагтаар 10н жилынхан, оюутнууд оролцдог гэхдээ зөвхөн англиар л ярих дүрэмтэй. Тэгээд англиар хөгжилдөж байгаад таалагдсан нэгнээ сонгодог нэвтрүүлэг үзлээ. Манай залуу үе ямар ч мундаг болцын. Дуржигнуулж байналээшд. Залуу үе маань англи хэл сайн, тэгээд мэдээллээс хоцордоггүй л бол гадаадад суралцаж чаднаа. Над мэтийн лангүүггүй нөхөд л эндээ ингээд байж байх биз. Тэгээд явсан хүмүүс нь бүгд эндээ иргэж ирэх байлгүй дээ.
Bayarllaa. Bi amerikt suraltsahiig husch bgaa. Yaduu buurai ornii oyutan bolson xoino ajil hiij l taaraa. Manai Mongolchuud amerikt ochxooroo niitleg yamar turliin ajil hiideg tsalin ntriin talaar medeelel beltgej uguuch. Ertnees biyee beldeye. Ajil hiih chiglelee songood ter talruugaa uuriiguu bolowsruulii.
Хөөрхөн блог байнаа.
үлмээдээ баярлалаа маш их хэрэгтэй зүйл байна
Ene ohin chine haanahiin yamar surguuld surdag ve. Yag ene namtariig materialdaa hawsargasan yum uu.
Xeregtei medeelel bna.
garchignaasaa avhuulaad hudal huurmag zuil n medegdej baina.
Anonymous:::: Энэ чиь үнэн намтар шдээ. Дээрх нэр ус сургуул он жилыг өөрчилсөн. Энэ намтарын эзэн одоо магистерт тэтгэлэгээр суралцаж байгаа болно.
Ммм, маш хэрэгтэй зөвлөмж байна. Дээнкс ^^
Үлмэдэх ээ. Ахиад иймэрхүү намтар байвал тавиад өгөөч...Баярлалаа ^^.
Хөөрхөн хэрэгтэй блог байна. Хүнд юм өгч чаддаг. Цааш нь бичээд байгаарай Үлмэдэх ээ.
Нээрээ сониноос сургууль руу явуулах намтар дээрээ ийм юм бичиж болно гэж төсөөлж ч байсангүй. Юун 6 фит өндөртэй бор нүдтэй нөхөр вэ. хөөрхөн сэтгэсэн байна шд. Үүнийг уншсан хүн нь савж унатлаа инээсэн байхдаа. эгдүү нь хүрээд тэтгэлэг өгөхөөр шийдсэн юм байна гэж л бодогдмоор байна шүү.
үнэхээр хэрэгтэй мэдээлэл байна баярлалаа Суралцах төлөвлөгөөний загвар байвал нийтэлж өгөөч маш их баярлах болно
ямар инээдтэй юм бичдийн бэ цэцэрлэгийн хүүхдийн зохион бичлэг шиг л юм байна ш дээ тэгээд 100%тэтгэлэг авсан гээд байгаан шүү худлаа байлгүй дээ
за манайхаан магистрт сурах гэж байгаа хүн ийм юм бичвэл цаанаас нь уучлаарай та high school д сур гэх байлгүй ха ха
mash saihan blog bainaa mash ih taaladlaa. hamgiin gol ni hun=muust yu heregtei baidag tedend uneheer tuslii gesen setgel nevt medregdej baina. chi saihan blog neejee. amjilt husii chamd tsaashdaa oshoo olon heregtei zuil oruulj baigaarai. bayarlalaa.
zarim neg humuus-n helsniig ter bolgon bitgii emzegleerei. hun tarhiniihaa hemjeegeer l ,ooriinhoo amidraliin turshlagaar l harsnaaraa yarij baigaa baih. za tegeed good luck and have a good day to you!
Post a Comment
Блогтоо мэдээ нийтлэхдээ өөрийн бодол, өөрийн үгээр өөрийн санааг бичдэг билээ. Мэдээ таалагдсан бол сэтгэгдэл үлдээхээ мартуузай :)
Та сэтгэгдэл бичихдээ Name/URL эсвэл Anonymous гэсэнийг сонгон бичвэл хялбар байх болно.